Name:  Michelle Legare 
Sign-in Time:  5/9/99 9:57:13 AM 
Found by:  
RU Address:  Woodstock, U S A 
Email:  inkshell@yahoo.com 
URL:  www.geocities.com/SoHo/Bistro/8751 
Comments:  WoW! this is great! I really 
like what you did to my poem! Everyone's 
poem looks great for that matter. 
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Name:  Not available 
Sign-in Time:  10/25/98 10:34:16 AM 
Found by:  Not available 
Address:  Not available 
Email:  patricia@camalott.com 
URL:  Not available 
Comments:  Danzr von Thai, your short poem spoke 
beautifully to the feelings of the individual, 
the desperation one feels in the face of world 
leaders' blindness. 
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Name:  Not available 
Sign-in Time:  10/25/98 10:30:08 AM 
Found by:  Not available 
Address:  Not available 
Email:  patricia@camalott.com 
URL:  Not available 
Comments:  Doug Tanouory, your bitter-sweet poem 
is very effective, very affecting. The "white noise" 
of the words, the descriptions, support even as 
they try to ignore the desperate decisions of 
survival. Somewhere in the mind of the reader is 
the question, "Is it better to live on alone or 
die together?" 
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Name:  Not available 
Sign-in Time:  10/25/98 10:20:04 AM 
Found by:  Not available 
Address:  Not available 
Email:  patricia@camalott.com 
URL:  Not available 
Comments:  Jerry Jenkins, you made rhyme work in a 
complex but unforced way that supports the clear 
imagery and calm acceptance of the inevitable. There 
is a mystic quality to the poem that heightens its effect. 
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Name:  Not available 
Sign-in Time:  10/25/98 10:05:06 AM 
Found by:  Not available 
Address:  Not available 
Email:  patricia@camalott.com URL:  //www.geocities.com/Athens/Delphi/1890/ 
Comments:  I especially like your poem, Jim Drew. 
The background I found is perfect, I think, and 
I was lucky to find it quickly. The thought of 
those two people walking slowly with determination 
and desperation toward one another along the 
railroad tracks touches my heart. It is the kind 
of plan my family has - to live together or to 
die together. I hope you're as pleased with the 
final effect as I am. 
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Name:  Christi 
Sign-in Time:  10/6/98 10:12:36 PM 
Found by:  you sent me an e-mail 
Address:  FL, USA 
Email:  christi@smartluck.com 
URL:  http://home.att.net/~joe.ah 
Comments:  Nice page =) 
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Name:  Bear1Mage 
Sign-in Time:  9/15/98 8:37:54 PM 
Found by:  Not available 
Address:  Not available 
Email:  bear1mage@hotmail.com 
URL:  http://members.xoom.com/Bear1Mage/index. 
Comments:  Patricia I wanted to add my voice to 
the list of those giving thanks to you and your 
efforts. To ride a dream one must give of themselves 
and thus is the cost and the rewards of the dream 
the same thing. So good luck with your dream and 
may you find fulfillment and reason to dream once 
again. Good luck Bear 
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Name:  soft`rain 
Sign-in Time:  9/7/98 2:56:16 PM 
Found by:  A message from A~R 
Address:  New Jersey, USA 
Email:  sonnet@p3.net 
URL:  http://cyberenet.net/~gemini/index.htm 
Comments:  A~R... Pat... Hey, it looks 
great but even reads better! *smile* A worthy effort 
for a worthy subject! Thanks for helping Pat! ... Ginny 
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Name:  Patricia 
Sign-in Time:  9/6/98 1:57:09 PM 
Found by:  designed it 
Address:  Texas, USA 
Email:  patricia@camalott.com 
URL:  http://www.geocities.com/Athens/Delphi/ 
Comments:  Readers, writers, please comment on the 
page. It is very long and could be made up of 
peel-away pages instead. As it is, I think it is 
dramatic and yet does nothing to take attention 
away from the most important part: your work. 
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Name:  Patricia 
Sign-in Time:  8/30/98 11:09:41 PM 
Found by:  The Artist in Residence sent me the address 
Address:  Texas, USA 
Email:  patricia@camalott.com 
URL:  http://geocities.com/Athens/Delphi/1890/ 
Comments:  A-in-R, you are doing well for a self-professed novice! Keep it up (& I'll help)! 

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