06/03/00 21:01:20
| Comments: You added more and didn't tell me????? :P well, sounds good, I'll make more comments later. |
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05/11/99 15:51:26
| Comments: Hey honey I love you and I cant wait to get maried, but your art sucks!!! |
| Comments: Hey honey I love you and I cant wait to get maried, but your art sucks!!! |
| Comments: James I would like you to come with me to start a baby farm!!! If you want you can bring Angela also. P.S. your art sucks!!! |
| Comments: I was looking at your site and I liked it a lot, but I think you need to take out the art section because you are the most god awful piece of crap artist that I've ever seen! |
| Comments: Hey buddy!!! I was just checking out!!! |
| Comments: cool map, good music. I dont know. Do I need to say more? |
| Comments: well i haven't read it yet, but i bet it's good! :) |
| Comments: Hey Friend-- True Story-- I'm teaching drama at a Catholic girls school in Samoa in the South Pacific. I left all my drama exercise stuff in California and Minnesota. And there is no library here on this particular island so it was great to be able to use yr stuff from the net. Thanks! Ia manuia le po, O Tagielu |
| Comments: Hi sweetie! just thought i'd see if you'd changed anything around since i last visited. You ever gonna work on that story again? ;) 143!!!!!! |
| Comments: Hey there hun, haven't talked to you in a long time.. thought I'd say hi and stuffrage. Drop me a line sometime and tell me how you are.. life has been busy.. |
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Just surfing. Thanks.
09/23/98 22:37:15
| Comments: hi! just looking to see if you've changed anything recently... you need to write more of that story!! 143 |
Cindy - 09/10/98 07:53:51 My URL:http://www.0001011.com/users/cindy My Email:cinth@usa.net comment: Nice page.... please come visit my site :-) Thanks, Cindy | Comments: |
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Cool page Please visit my website too
08/26/98 03:57:18
| Comments: Try to put more info on air hockey on your page. What you have is really good. Really liked the part where you described about why one should play. By the way, I played a lot of sports too, before my awakening by the puck. |
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| Comments: dallas cowboys are going to slaughter the 49ers! |
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| Comments: Hey, cousin, you're giving advise?! Scary! I haven't been to a movie that doesn't have begin with "Disney's . . ." in ages. It was great seeing you when you came down; hopefully next time my kids won't bruise you up. By the way, how much is it worth t keep the karoke(sp) video off the Net? Take care! your oldest cousin, Sandra P.S. Your fiance is cute! |
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| Comments: haven't seen the whole site yet, but it's good to have another site for the important stuff - air hockey!! you might link to darrell's page - look for ShakeyD with webcrawler.com take it easy. |
| Comments: That description is really gruesome... I like it!!! 14376 p.s. there's a typo in the first part of the last installment--"e" should be "he". |
| Comments: James, I like your commet about AH on your page: "it's not a game, it's a way of life..." |
| Comments: Hi!!!! I like the new addition--yes, I read your entire air hockey page and quite enjoyed it I might add. I think now you need to work on your story. =) Anyways, g/t/g 4:20!!!! =) |
| Comments: Please keep up the good Air Hockey stuff |
| Comments: I love the enthusiasm you are getting for air hockey James! Though you keep mentioning about not picking up a mallet in over a year... I would like to hear more from you about that. You have done so much more with this page than I will be able to do with mine (it is under construction), I admire that!! If anyone who is sifting through James' guestbook would like to partake in some air hockey action, send me an e-mail and I'll be happy to link you up to our society and add you to the database. Congrats Jose Mora and Pedro Ortero!! I unlike many others would like for you guys to hold onto those ranks for a while. *grin* We Californians are on the rise of surpassing the Texans! Viva la air hockey!! |
| Comments: Awesome page! I am highly impressed! This is not a usual page for geocites. I surf around all the time and hardly ever come across a page this good! You must have spend a lot of time! Great Job! |
| Comments: Yes, I finally read installment 7... Good job, I can (like) totally picture the house--of course, I've been there, but anyways, WRITE MORE!!! 1436!!!! |
| Comments: Cool Page.. |
| Comments: I love your graphics. Nice theme too.. I can't wait for you to write more on your story... It is pretty cool! |
| Comments: You had to stop there didn't you?!? Other than leaving me in suspense, great job, I like it!! Check the last sentence of installment 2, it needs another word or something. You're right, it would make a good movie but it also makes a good book. 143 |
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| Comments: I was a little alarmed by the moving football pictures- ah this page flows with testosterone! But that is not a bad thing! Looks cool, keep it up, and hey, I'll see you at Snowfollies in a few days, minus Micah... = < Anyways, see ya! -Katie P.S. "Do the Hustle!" |
| Comments: Well done page. I invite you and anyone else to visit my webpage. If you stop by, please sign my guestbook so I know you were there. |
| Comments: You do not suck at writing!!! And you'd better write more soon-- I want to know what happens!!! |
| Comments: HEY SEND ME THE PEEWEE SONG!! PLEASE!!!! |
| Comments: wow!! you are quite the pimp!!! 3 girls!?!?!?!....wow!! and you knew the movie the jerk....i am quite impressed!! AND YOU CHEAT TOO!! YOU HAVE A COMMENTS FIELD!!! NYAH!! :P |
| Comments: hey do you remember me we chated the other day and my handle is 69101 and i thought you were cool but it's been a while since i chated with you. e-mail me and maybe we could get to know each other a little better. |
| Comments: James, You are the coolest guy I know! *hugs* Dana |
| Comments: Ok, I am obviously bored since I even got this far but geez James! You have way to much time on your hands!!!!! We miss ya down here so why don't you put some of your efforts into studying so you will get back here some day huh!?! |
| Comments: First off, I lke the song you put on there! Now, it was definately a good start. If you want it to be a book, all you need is a little bit of description. Maybe break up the dialogue a bit but nothing lengthy. As for a transition, whether it is book or movie, why not just jump to him in his car, looking for the road he's supposed to take or something. What did you have in mind for the forgetting his keys thing? Anyways, I say its a great start! I like it! One suggestion: make the reader care ab ut Bryan (in other words make him somewhat unlike the real Brian) and it will come as more of a shock when he dies. Just something to think about. Anyways, I'm done commenting now so BYE! WRITE MORE! |
| Comments: This is to let all you know how I would answer these questions... and to make sure this works. |