From pit-manager.MIT.EDU!daemon Sun Apr 12 18:33:14 1992 remote from piraya Received: by piraya.bad.se (1.64/waf) via UUCP; Sun, 12 Apr 92 20:48:58 GMT for piraya.bad.se!bozze Received: from PIT-MANAGER.MIT.EDU by mail.swip.net (5.61+IDA/KTH/LTH/1.2) id AAmail14676; Sun, 12 Apr 92 18:33:14 +0200 Received: by pit-manager.MIT.EDU (5.61/2.1JIK) id ; Sun, 12 Apr 92 12:33:06 -0400 Date: Sun, 12 Apr 92 12:33:06 -0400 From: Mr Background Message-Id: <9204121633.AA06238@pit-manager.MIT.EDU> Subject: Reply from mserv re: send usenet/news.announce.newusers/Hints_on_writing_style_for_Usenet Reply-To: mail-server@pit-manager.mit.edu X-Problems-To: postmaster@pit-manager.mit.edu Precedence: bulk To: bozze@piraya.bad.se (Bo Arnoldson) Xref: bloom-picayune.mit.edu news.announce.newusers:777 news.answers:605 Path: bloom-picayune.mit.edu!snorkelwacker.mit.edu!usc!cs.utexas.edu!uunet!paladin.american.edu!gatech!purdue!spaf From: spaf@cs.purdue.EDU (Gene Spafford) Newsgroups: news.announce.newusers,news.answers Subject: Hints on writing style for Usenet Message-ID: Date: 24 Feb 92 06:10:46 GMT Expires: 24 Apr 92 18:10:45 GMT Followup-To: news.newusers.questions Organization: Dept. of Computer Sciences, Purdue Univ. Lines: 101 Approved: spaf@cs.purdue.EDU Supersedes: Archive-name: usenet-writing-style/part1 Original-author: ofut@hubcap.clemson.edu (A. Jeff Offutt VI) Last-change: 30 Nov 91 by spaf@cs.purdue.edu (Gene Spafford) I would like to take a moment to share some of my knowledge of writing style. If you read the suggestions below, remember: it's easy to agree that they make sense but it's much harder to apply them. References: Cunningham and Pearsall, "How to Write For the World of Work" Strunk & White, "Elements of Style" The above references are both excellent books. Cunningham is a standard in tech writing classes and won an award for the best tech writing book from the Association for Teaching of Technical Writing. I was lucky enough to take a class from him as an undergraduate. Strunk is a standard in college composition classes. Other ideas here come from my own experience on the net and hints from other people. This is a "long article." The rest of it is simply a list of pointers. Writing style: * Write *below* the readers' reading level. The avg. person in the US reads at a 5th grade level (11 years of age). The avg. professional reads at about the 12th grade level (18 years of age). * Keep paragraphs short and sweet. Keep sentences shorter and sweeter. This means "concise," not cryptic. * White space is not wasted space -- it greatly improves clarity. A blank line only adds a byte to the article length, so don't be stingy if it will help make your meaning clearer. * Pick your words carefully. Writing with precision is as important here as it is in any other kind of discourse. Consider carefully whether what you have written can be misinterpreted, and whether that is something you wish to have happen. * People can only grasp about seven things at once. This means ideas in a paragraph, major sections, etc.. * Avoid abbreviations and acronyms, if possible, and define the ones you use. * There are several variations on any one sentence. A passive, questioning or negative sentence takes longer to read. Net style: * Subtlety is not communicated well in written form - especially over a computer. * The above applies to humor as well. (rec.humor, of course, not included.) * When being especially "flame-boyant", I find it helpful to go to the bathroom before actually sending. Then, I often change the tone considerably. :-) Take a break before posting something in anger or that might hurt or anger others. * Subject lines should be used very carefully. How much time have you wasted reading articles with a misleading subject line? The "Subject:" header line can be edited in all the various posting programs (as can the "Distribution:", "Newsgroups:" and "Followup-To:" header lines). * References need to be made. When you answer mail, you have the original message fresh in your mind. When I receive your answer, I don't. * It's *much* easier to read a mixture of upper and lower case letters. * Leaving out articles (such as "the," "a," "an," etc.) for "brevity" mangles the meaning of your sentences and takes longer to read. It saves you time at the expense of your reader. * Be careful of contextual meanings of words. For instance, I used "articles" just now. In the context of netnews, it has a different meaning than I intended. * Make an effort to spell words correctly. Obvious misspellings are jarring and distract the reader. Every news posting program allows you to edit your article before posting, and most systems have some kind of spelling checker program that you can use on your article. * Remember - this is an international network. * Remember - your current or future employers may be reading your articles. So might your spouse, neighbors, children, and others who will long-remember your gaffes. 'Nuff said. These suggestions are all easily supported by arguments and research. There's a lot more to say, but.... -- Gene Spafford Software Engineering Research Center & Dept. of Computer Sciences Purdue University, W. Lafayette IN 47907-1398 Internet: spaf@cs.purdue.edu phone: (317) 494-7825